Col 299-Sophomore Portfolio
PEER EDITING FEEDBACK SHEETS

Journal Entries

Journal Entry Writer: _____________________________________

Peer Editor: _____________________________________

I. Read the journal entry, looking at spelling, grammar, sentence construction, general clarity of writing, etc. What needs to be improved?

II. Read the requirements for the specific event and the General Guidelines for Journal Entries.

III. Read the Journal Entry for a second time
a. Does the Journal Entry clearly address each requirement for the event?

b. If any requirements are not addressed what are they?

c. Does the paper go beyond just a description of the event or activity and include analysis and demonstrate critical thinking skills? Please give specific examples.

d. Is the Journal Entry interesting to read? Please explain.

e. Are there enough details so that you understand the event and analysis? Please explain.

f. Are the thoughts well organized and the ideas logically developed or is the argument confusing? Please explain.

g. Any other suggestions for improvements?